Thanks Ano, thank you so much :) :)
Ravi, Dude, This is awesome. I clicked on the link and checked Beautiful Mind's work, too.I couldn't help noticing two misprints. They are:thirds stanza third line last word: I think it's "see"fifth stanza, first line, first word: Is it "Not"Ravi, keep it up! dude! henryblogwalker the Dude
A Thousand thanks Henry you just made my day Heh, heh,Yeah, I agree see is more appropriate than saw,thanks henry again,Nae is used mostly in verses in lieu of the word No, it has the same meaning.......
Aha like "nay", isn't it? Oops, I thought our Ravi dude is a contemporary poet. He he! henryblogwalker the Dude
Yeah, Henry, like nay....you are correct...:)Contemporary..eh?.....:) :)
Welcome back Ravi Ayya..!
Thanks Beetle...Ramadan Kareem, Habibi :) :)
The beauty of a superb piece of writing is what is left out–the empty spaces. You do that beautifully.Welcome back Ravi...:)
Thanks Poddi,You mean some thing like " Reading between the lines ", don't you now?....heh, heh,Well, my dear, don't do it too often, there is nothing to it more often than not...:) :)
Heh heh !!! welcome back big brother, As I told you can’t get away from that saga of hunter this easily, I’ll be chasing you till it’s done just behalf of all the readers, so pack your bags for the journey in to the wilderness. :D :D :D
Thanks Nawam for your wishes heh, heh...No, kollo, I haven't forgotten the hunter, he is with me day & night ....its getting rather fidgety and nervous for both of us with the saga uncompleted. For the last two weeks or so the hunter is haunting me in my dreams threatening me to finish this one way or the other. '' මේ උඹට මම ආයෙ කියන්නෙ නෑ, හොඳද?....මහ ලොකුවට ලෝඩ් බකිංහැම් වගෙ මගෙ කතාව පටන්ගෙන දැන් අර මොනවද කාපු මොකාද එකා වාගෙ ඉන්නව නේද විරවපට්ටං ගහගෙන?....හොඳ හිතිං මේකෙ දෙකිං එකක් ඉවර කරපං හරිය?...මොනවදෑ එහෙනං ආයෙ...එක්කො බැරි මඟුල් පටන් නොගෙන නිකං ඉන්න ඕනෙ.....''Two or three times during every night I am being jolted out of my sleep sweating all over ... its really rather scary Nawam.....:( :(So I am going to finish it sooner rather than later...If only for the peace of my mind ....
What happened to the saga of the hunter..and to you. Nice piece of work . It is so nice to see you back.
Hey, I told you all that I am leaving on my annual vacation in my last post.....it was about that fire where all those innocent children perished ....remember it?quote / ලබන සතියෙ මගෙ වාර්ෂික නිවාඩුව..../ unquoteSo, Bindi.... I was on my annual vacation & virtually off line for the most part primarily due to my net connection at home being absurdly slow....Well to tell you the truth I admit there were more important reasons in addition and I am not going into any details as a post or two may be written on it...heh, heh,Thanks Bindi for your appreciation & really its nice to be back ...I missed you all....
In the garden greeny I was wandering happilyMurmuring hum hum humBirds sang merrily flowers smiled shylyAnd the butterflies too flewSuddenly I froze a still wanting to run and screamMy eyes popping out so wideHanging by a mossy tree cradling in the cool breezeI saw the beast so wildUgly hairy long spikes spread along the world wideStood there the eight legged oneHis silver home shining in the peeping sun lightWaiting for the victim to comeIt wasn't my habit to stare at the beastsBut I couldn't look away from himI might be going crazy I wondered out madlyBut I saw a little smile on himHis eyes were set on a dancing butterflyFlying around his silvery homeHis face was calm and I saw that he was charmAnd knew she had come to see himShe came close by and tangled in the webHe crawled with the smile on his lipsI closed my eyes but peeped through the lidsTo see him releasing her wingsShe laughed with pleasure and he smiled in leisureI still couldn't believe my eyesThey talked through eyes and danced through heartsAnd I knew I'm going to love them
The spider was waiting for her so longingly,Counting his I am not sure what,If he had fingers that would do definitely,Otherwise anything suffice like his legs,When at last he saw her merrily floating on a gust of wind so freely,And ambled to welcome her at the edge of his web,The duo sat on a silvery strand shining so brilliantly,Sickle of a moon was rising over yonder casting a glow over them,He was waiting for her kiss as usual,But she was not willing to do so today,With an exasperating murmur asked he, '' Why are you so shy & bashful today my dear? ''Nay a word with a shake of her head,Did she indicate the shadows beneath them,Turning his head he looked down at once,Grunted in a voice akin to being strangled, '' Ohhh, isn't it that girl now? ''Said the spider shaking his head, '' The gal is eccentric do you know?'' '' Nuhugune to be precise '' said he merrily, '' Always screams her head off, '' '' Dashing away like the devil is after her, '' '' Whenever she sees me always like that, '' '' But I have done nothing to her...'' '' But look at her now my dear,''Said the butterfly smiling radiantly, '' She is looking at us rooted there, '' '' Unblinking eyes shining merrily, '' '' I don't like her gawking at us, '' '' what's with her I don't know, '' '' shall I scare her away for good?''Asked he with a sombre face. '' May be this is the first time she has,'' '' Seen a spider & butterfly in love, '' '' So don't do anything harsh my dear '' '' We would sit here like nothing the matter,''Wriggling closer to him on the web,Myriad lights dancing in her eyesPlacing her head on his shoulder,She wanted from this world nothing more ever,That gal could believe not her eyes,Rooted to the spot as if a statuette,She went on gazing in wonder,At love at its most enigmatic manifestation,
මගේ සිතුවිලි ගැන ඔබේ සිතුවිලි